Question

将下列英语短文进行改错

dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life some use

them in a good way when some others don't. as far as i am concerned,more ahd more students now use computers help with their study. if we meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always got help from the internet. to spend their spare time,they look for more informations with the computers to have much more knowledge. at the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study . they really in dangerous. that is how we mainly use computers. they can either do good and harm to

Answer 1

第一，这篇作文每一句打头词的第一位字母都必须改成大写。
有些句子不同我也稍稍改或加了一些词。

以下是我自己改过的，应该没有错。:3

Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life. Some use
them in a good way when some others don't.

As far as i am concerned, more and more students now use computers to help with their study. If they meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework, they always get help from the internet.

To spend their spare time, they look for more information with the computers to have much more knowledge. At the same time, however, the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatting with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study. They are really in danger.

That is how we mainly use computers. They can either do both good or harm to us.

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不知道是不是你要的。
~ 樱。

Answer 2

第二行when改为while 第三行help前加to，we改为they 第四行got改为get look for 最好改为search
第五行informations改为单数，at the same最好去掉, the 变a
第六行chatted变chatting, that前加so(最好用lead to,不确定so that能否用于否定意义的以致于）
第七行force最好改为let后边用return。they really in dangerous这句话没动词，可以说it's to dangerous to do so. that is 去掉

差不多就这些，但里面还有小问题存在，例如标点、句子表达是否通顺等
好好改吧，加油！

Answer 3

dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life some use

them in a good way when[while ]some others don't. as far as i am concerned[加上about ] , more and more students now use computers[加上to ] help with their study. if we[they ] meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always got help from the internet. to spend their spare time, they look for more informations[information ] with the computers to have much more knowledge. at the same time,however,the [a ]great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted [chatting ]with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study . they [加上are ]really in dangerous[danger ]. that is how we mainly use computers. they can either do good and[or ] harm to

when—while: while表示对比,”然而”
concerned后加上about : as far as I am concerned about就…而言
help前加上to :use … to do sth .
we—they: 前后人称要一致
informations—information: information为不可数名词
the --a : a great number of大量的
chatted --chatting : “对聊天感兴趣”,与PC games是并列关系,位于介词in之后,故用动名词V-ing形式
they 后加上are:此句缺少动词
dangerous—danger:in danger处于危险中
and --or : either…or…为固定搭配.