Question

如有做不到位的地方还请不吝赐教 这句话的英文翻译？

Please feel free to advice me if I don't do the best way in anything.这样翻译可以吗? 谢谢！

Answer 1

Please kindly advice if I could make any improvement.
先说明一下我这样翻译的理由吧。。。我们是双重否定表肯定，但是英文邮件这样表达有点啰嗦，所以不妨试试用直接的方式说明我们很乐意接受建议。选词上可以再斟酌，但是邮件里常见如上。
你的翻译中主要的问题在于if后面的从句时态尴尬，否定尴尬。但是人家也看得懂的。

Answer 2

Don't hesitate to advise/remind me if I have not performed well

Answer 3

你的也可以
If you do not do the best, please feel free to tell me

Answer 4

Don't hesitate to advise/remind me if I have not performed well