Question

我把二个人的对话变成描述二人的对话,看看对吗?如果不对的话告诉我那里错了并且帮我改正谢谢急

对话:
JONA:where's sally yan?
YAN:she's in the gardan.
A:what's she doing?
Y:she's sitting under the tree.
A:is Tim in the gardon too?
Y:yes;he is,he's climbing the tree
A:I bed your pardon?who's climbing the tree?
Y:Tim is!
A:what about the dog?
Y:The dog's in the gardon too!it's running across the grass!it's running after a cat!
描述:
MR yan and his wife are talking about their daughter Sally and son Tim,Sally and Tim are in the garden,Sally is sitting under the tree,Tim is climbing the tree,The dog's in the garden too,
it's running across the grass,it's running after a cat.
什么是喂语?那我的句子做个比方?

Answer 1

没什么大问题。不过所有的逗号都要换成句号！因为每个句子只能有一个谓语。

谓语就是句子里的动词。比方说：The dog's in the garden too 中，谓语就是动词“is”。一句话里，这样的动词只能有一个。两个分句可以用连词，如“and”"while"之类的分开，或者用分号。但是逗号是不可以的。

在英语中，逗号的含义是补充说明。也就是说，即使把逗号后面的内容删去，句子的本意也不会发生变化。而你的情况明显不同，所以不能动逗号。

Answer 2

不要都用逗号。一个句子结束要用句号。
可以这样修改：
Mr. Yan and his wife are talking about their daughter Sally and son Tim, who are in the garden.Sally is sitting under the tree, while Tim is climbing the tree.The dog's in the garden too and it's running after a cat across the grass.

Answer 3

MR yan and his wife are talking about what their daughter Sally and son Tim are doing,Sally and Tim are in the garden,Sally is sitting under the tree,Tim is climbing the tree,The dog's in the garden too,
it's running across the grass,it's running after a cat

Answer 4

因为每个句子只能有一个谓语。