Question

英文短文改错.很紧急。谢谢

I want to go to the Beijing these days,but I never have gone to Biejing,so I want to you can be a guide of mine. I want to go to the Great Wall,the Summar Palace and other famous sights,And I also supposed to live in your home.We can talk about our life and study in daily life.I think that you can't mind me living in you home. We can not only change our hearts but also greeting your parents.At last, I will very appreciate you can be a guide of mine.I think this trip will be very interesting,and there will be something new that I never seen, I can't wait to going Beijing. It attract me very much.
请找出错误并改正。急求，谢谢了。
(找出的错误请告知我是在那一句话上)

Answer 1

I want to go to （the删除） Beijing these days,but I never have gone（been） to Biejing,so I want to(that) you can be a guide of mine(me). I want to go to the Great Wall,the Summar Palace and other famous sights,And I also supposed (suppose)to live in your home.We can talk about our life and study in daily life.I think that you can't (wouldn't)mind me living in you (your)home. We can not only change our hearts but also greeting(greet) your parents.At last, I will very appreciate you can be a guide of mine(me).I think this trip will be very interesting,and there will be something new that I never seen, I can't wait to going（go）(to) Beijing. It attrast(attracts )me very much

Answer 2

but i never have gone to Beijing------but i have never been to Beijing.
so i want to you can be a guide of mine-------so i hope you can be a giude for me.
And I also supposed to live in your home------And I also want/propose to live in your home.
We can talk about our life and study in daily life-----We can talk about our daily life and study.
I think that you can't mind me living in you home------I think you won't mind me living in your home
We can not only change our hearts but also greeting your parents------We can not only exchange our thoughts but also greet your parents.
I will very appreciate you can be a guide of mine------I will appreciate it very much if you can be my guide.
and there will be something new that I never seen--------and there will be something new.
I can't wait to going Beijing----- I can't wait to go to Beijing
It attract me very much.----It attracts me very much.

我只是帮你改了明显的语法错误和语病，你自己再好好组织一下吧。