Question

英语翻译 翻译下面句子,并希望改正下毛病,改通顺但不要改变本身意思!

Life in the accident. We who have no way to forecast. Lonely and long life, I can go on. It is only in this way. Many people would think that I was really very happy very happy. However, they have never entered my mind to have a look. I don't think I will really go to a serious understanding of myself. This is like this. And I don't want to think too much, no need now. I know I am a very pessimistic person.
Maybe I am really fail, since coming here, I did not seem real, laugh from the heart, sometimes even a day won't talk, I often ask myself: This is the real me? This in the end or not I? Yes, I have laughed, but never one for my own smile, I have changed, become I don't even know myself. Who the hell am I?
Now can not go back, I know I have to go on a let me regret the way, things have occurred had never come back, a wrong step by step wrong, I am not perfect, and even can be said that nothing is right.

Answer 1

请不要见怪，因为我要对你句真心话，你的英语太过中式化，我实在无法替你翻译成中文，就算翻了亦不会通顺，原因是我读不通你很多的句子，所以只能一路更正，一路告诉你的错处，那样会对你很有帮助。

Life in the accident. We who have no way to forecast. 这个开头已很难令英语人士明白你究竟是要表达甚麼? 应该改为: Life is full of surprises, there is no way to predict it.
Lonely and long life, I can go on 亦并非英式英语，外老绝对不知你说甚麼?所以要改为: The long and lonely journey of life, but I must go on.
It is only in this way 要改为 : And its the only way
I was really very happy very happy 同样情形，要改为: I am really really happy.
However, they have never entered (要加 into) my mind to have a look. I don't think I will (加ever be) really (go to a serious understanding of 改为 going to understand) myself. This is (like this 改为 just like that). And I don't want to think too much, no need now. I know I am a very pessimistic person.

Maybe I (am改为 have) really fail(加 ed), since (coming 改为 have come to) here, I did not seem real, laugh(ing) from the heart, sometimes even (a day won't talk 改为 would not talk for a whole day), I often ask myself: (This isi应该是: Is this) the real me? (This in the end or not I 那为 Is this really the end for me) ? Yes, I have laughed, but never one (for 改为 of) my own smile, I have changed, (become 改为 and) I don't even know myself (加 any more). Who the hell am I?

Now (I) can not go back, I know (that) I have to go on ( a let me regret the way, things have occurred had never come back, a wrong step by step wrong 这一段连我也弄不清你究竟想表达甚麼? 所以我只能用我的推断替你改写: Things had gone wrong step by step. They are now long gone. It is too late for me to regret it ), I am not perfect, and even can be said that nothing is right.

以下是更正後的版本:
Life is full of surprises, there is no way to predict it. The long and lonely journey of life, but I must go on. And it's the only way. Many people would think that I was really really happy. But they have never entered my mind to have a look. I don't think I will ever be really going to understand myself. This is just like that. And I don't want to think too much, no need now. I know I am a very pessimistic person.

Maybe I have really failed, since have come here, I did not seem real, laughing from the heart, sometimes even would not talk for a whole day, I often ask myself: Is this the real me? Is this really the end for me ? Yes, I have laughed, but never one of my own smile, I have changed, and I don't even know myself anymore. Who the hell am I?

Now I cannot go back, I know that I have to go on. Things had gone wrong step by step. They are now long gone. It is too late for me to regret it, I am not perfect, and even can be said that nothing is right.

已替你入改好了，希望会令你满意采纳，谢谢。

追问

可是你应该把你改好的翻译出来吧

追答

人生每每多变，令人难测，漫长孤独的生命旅途里，我只有一定要勇往向前，别无选择。
很多人都以为我非常非常之快乐，但没有一个真正了解我的内心深处，其实我跟本永远也无法了解自己。而我也不去想太多了，现在亦没有如此须要，我知我自己是一个悲观的人。
我可能是失败了，自从来到了这儿後，我觉得我不似是真的，只能有内心的暗笑，一天到晚一言不发，我常常都在问自己，这真的是我吗? 这会不会是我的人生尽头?是的,我有笑，但那不我自己的笑，我变了，我已无法辨认自己了，究竟我是谁?
现在无法走向回头路，我知道一定要向前，过去的一切都一步接一步地恨错难返，後悔已太迟! 我知我并不完美，也可以说简直是一无是处!

你要翻译，我给你辩好了，希望会令你满意。

Answer 2

句子在？

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人生中的事故，我们是无法预测到的。孤独以及长长的人生，我可以继续的。这只是在这路途上。很多人都认为我是非常非常的快乐的。但是，他们从未走进我的想法，看看我的心。我不认为我对自己是非常了解的。这就是如此的。然后我不想要想太多，现在不需要。我知道我是一个非常悲观的人。
或者我真的很失败，自从来到这里，我看不到任何真实，发自内心的笑，有时候甚至一整天不说话，我时常问自己：这是真正的我吗？这到底还是不是我？是的，我笑了，但是从来没有为我自己而笑。我变了，变得我自己都不知道自己是谁。我到底是谁？
现在无法回头了，我知道我必须继续走向让我后悔的路途。发生的事情没有折转的余地，一步步的错误，我不是完美的，甚至可以说，从来没有什么事情是正确的。

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我说···如果这是你的真实想法，这也太悲观了，我都不像你那样悲观，三无少女多好啊，三无少女是非常强大的一种生物！ =v=
好吧不打广告。溜走~

Answer 3

生活在事故中。（这句话就怪怪的）我们谁有能够预知未来的办法。孤独而又漫长的生活，可以极具下去。也只有这样子。许多人都认为我真的是很开心，然而，他们谁都不能进入到我的思维去看看。（我觉得思维mind不如该做内心heart）我不认为我真的会对自己有个严肃的理解。（我不知道你要表达什么样的意思，但是理解前面用严肃作定语，还是很奇怪）这样就是这样，我不想想太多，我现在也不需要。我知道我是一个非常悲观的人。

也许我真的失败了,因为来这里,我似乎并不真正发自内心的笑,有时甚至一天不会说话,我经常问自己:这是真正的我吗?这最终还是不是我?是的,我笑了,但是从来没有一个我自己的微笑,我已经改变了,成为我甚至不知道的我自己。我究竟是谁?

现在不能回去,我知道我必须去让我遗憾,事情发生的方式从未改变,一步错步步错,我不是完美的,甚至可以表示,没有什么是正确的。

Answer 4

生命中的意外事故。我们谁也没法预测。孤独而漫长的一生，我无法继续。只有这样。很多人都会认为我是真的很幸福很幸福。然而，他们从未进入我的心去看一看。我不认为我真的会去认真的了解自己。这是这样的。我不去想太多，不需要了。我知道我是一个很悲观的人。
也许我真的失败了，自从我来到这里，我似乎没有真正的，发自内心的笑，有时甚至一天不说话，我常常问自己：这是真正的我吗？这到底爱不爱我？是的，我笑了，但没有一个自己的微笑，我变了，变得我不认识我自己。我到底是谁？
现在回不去了，我知道我必须去一个让我后悔的路，事情已经发生了回不来的，一个错误的一步一步走错，我不是完美的，甚至可以说，没有什么是对的。