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Mikewastakentopolicestationandputinaroomwithanotherthief,anoldman.thismanlookedatMike... Mike was taken to police station and put in a room with another thief,an old man.this man looked at Mike said ,"why have they broght you there?" "i stole a small radio one day after their lessons ,"said Mike .the man laughed rude at Mike . "you ought to steal something really valuable, what you can be proud of ,so that your name is put on the newspaper .go and steal a lot of the money from a bank next time!"mike thought for a few seconds and then said ,"i can't do that ." "why not? are you afraid?" said the old thief . "no,“ said Mike ,"i am not afraid ,but the banks all closed at three o'clock ,and my lesson don't finish after four,'

swimming is very popular ,people like it in summer because water makes people felling cool. thought is you swim in a wrong place, it may not be safe .recently ,a lot of people died when enjoy themselves in water ,most of them were students.but some people are not careful enough in swimming .they often think they swim very well that nothing will happen on them in water .they die not because they were not good swimmer,but because they were not careful .so don't get into the water when you are alone .if there is "no swimming "sign ,don't get into water ,if you remeber these ,swimming will be safe.
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Mike was taken to police station and put in a room with another thief,an old man.this man looked at Mike said ,"why have they broght you there(改为here)?" "i stole a small radio one day after their lessons ,"said Mike .the man laughed rude(改为rudely) at Mike . "you ought to steal something really valuable, what (which)you can be proud of ,so that your name is put on the newspaper .go and steal a lot of the (删去the)money from a bank next time!"mike thought for a few seconds and then said ,"i can't do that ." "why not? are you afraid?" said the old thief . "no,“ said Mike ,"i am not afraid ,but the banks all closed(改为close) at three o'clock ,and(改为but) my lesson don't finish after(改为before) four,'

swimming is very popular ,people like it in summer because water makes people felling(改为feel) cool. thought is you swim in a wrong place, it may not be safe .recently ,a lot of people died when enjoy(enjoying) themselves in water ,most of them(who) were students.but some people are not careful enough in swimming .they often think they swim very(改为so) well that nothing will happen on them in water .they die(改为died) not because they were not good swimmer,but because they were not careful .so don't get into the water when you are alone .if there is "no swimming "sign ,don't get into water ,if you remeber these ,swimming will be safe.
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line 3那里you are ought to
第2篇:line2开头意思是如果你在那个地方,可能不安全么?你应该用if you.....而不是thought is...
还有后面when they enjoyed themselves...
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