Question

英语短文改错.

my sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day .she like it at once .then she bent down and pick up to look at a price on it.as she did this ,lots of tea splashed on his t-shirt! i had to try hardly not laugh at she shocked face ! my sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us it was turned out to be her own cup,that she had left on the shelf by mistake .the assistant was clearly as embarrasing as my sister for i just thought it was funny.

Answer 1

my sister saw a lovely cup when we are(were) shopping the other day. 时态一致，前面是saw过去时，were也应该是过去时。
she like(liked) it at once. 时态一致，整个故事发生在过去时，like也应该是过去时。
then she bent down and pick(picked) up to look at a price on it. 时态一致，过去时。
as she did this ,lots of tea splashed on his(her) t-shirt! 人称一致，茶水洒在妹妹的T 恤上，妹妹应该用her
i had to try hardly not (加一个to)laugh at she shocked face ! try to do 尽力做某事，try not to do 尽力不做某事
my sister wanted (加一个to） get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. want to do sth 想要做某事
it was(去掉was) turned out to be her own cup,that she had left on the shelf by mistake. It turned out to... 结果是.....
the assistant was clearly as embarrasing(embarrassed) as my sister for i just thought it was funny. embarrassed修饰人，“尴尬的”

Answer 2

my sister saw a lovely cup when we 【were】 shopping the other day .she 【liked】it at once .then she bent down and 【picked】 up to look at 【the】 price on it.as she did this ,lots of tea splashed on 【her】 t-shirt! i had to try 【hard】 【to】 not laugh at 【her】 shocked face ! my sister wanted [to] get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us it 【删除was】turned out to be her own cup,【which】 she had left on the shelf by mistake .the assistant was clearly as 【embarrassed】as my sister for i just thought it was funny.

我用括号标出来了，希望对你有帮助

Answer 3

my sister saw a lovely cup when we are（改成were) shopping the other day .she like(liked) it at once .then she bent down and pick(picked) up to look at a(the) price on it.as she did this ,lots of tea splashed on his(her) t-shirt! i had to try hardly not laugh(to laugh) at she(her) shocked face ! my sister wanted(wanted to) get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us(加逗号） it was turned out to be her own cup,(逗号去掉）that she had left on the shelf by mistake .the assistant was clearly as embarrasing(embarrased) as my sister（加逗号） for （but)i just thought it was funny.

括号内是需要改正的，不过最后一句话我不太确定，看没人回答，给你一点建议。

Answer 4

　　MY sister saw a lovely cup when we were shopping the other day .she liked it at once .then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.as she did this ,lots of tea splashed on his t-shirt! i had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face ! my sister wanted to get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us it was turned out to be her own cup,that she had left on the shelf by mistake .the assistant was clearly as embarrased as my sister for i just thought it was funny.
时态和短语上的小错误，祝楼主学习顺利。

Answer 5

when we are shopping 改为when we were shopping
she like it 改为 she liked it
pick up to look at a price on it改为 pickde up to lookde at a price on it

hardly not laugh 改为hardly laugh