Question

劳烦大神翻译一下，并分析一下句子成分，谢谢了。

The consciousness of what men will say of a woman who speaks the truth about her passions had roused her from her artist’s state of unconsciousness.

Answer 1

主语 The consciousness 谓语 had roused her from her artist’s state of unconsciousness.
剩下的是 The consciousness 的定语
句型很简单，难的是如何去理解这句话，理解了，才能翻译通顺。

这段说的什么意思？
一个女作家写作过程中对于是否大胆描写性欲而做的思想斗争。
她想根据自己artist’s state of unconsciousness（作家角色），写出她想写的东西：body（朣体）、passions（情欲），但是她的理性又告诉她：作为一个女人，写这些东西会被现实中的男人当作scandal的谈资。 最终还是放弃这样做了。

直译：男人们会如何谈论一个大讲自己情欲的女人这一意识把她从作家忘我的状态中唤醒

state of unconsciousness 是本句难点，作家的无意识状态，无意识是相对现实的，就是说作家写的东西本应该和作品没有直接联系，但由于世俗的观念，一个写情色的女人，总会被人非议。所以这里才会用到这种表达

然后通顺的意译一下就是：
男人们会去怎样评说一个写色情作品的女作家？ 想到这些让她无法继续写作状态，不得不考虑一下现实。

PS:感谢楼上给的上下文

Answer 2

　　She had thought of something about the body, about the passions, which it was unfitting for her as a woman to say. Men, her reason told her, would be shocked. The consciousness of what men will say of a woman who speaks the truth about her passions had roused her from her artist's state of unconsciousness. She could write no more. The trance was over. Her imagination could work no longer. This I believe to be a very common experience with women writers - they are impeded by the extreme conventionality of the other sex.

The consciousness [of what men will say of a woman (who speaks the truth about her passions)]had roused her from her artist’s state of unconsciousness.
这种男人将会怎样说一个讲述自己激情真相的女人的意识把她从艺术家的无意识状态唤醒

Answer 3

The consciousness of what men will say of a woman who speaks the truth about her passions had roused her from her artist’s state of unconsciousness.
什么人的意识会说一个女人会说真话关于她的激情已经激起她从她的艺术家的昏迷的状况。