Question

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The weekend is coming! I will be so busy as a bee .On the Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is fishing,I will have a dance class.I like danceing because it gives myself a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for my grandma on sunday.I am look forward to that moment！I am surely we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out loud.Besides.a lot stars appear in it.

Answer 1

The weekend is coming! I will be so （改为as）busy as a bee .On the Saturday morning,I have to rush to my math class.After it is fishing（改为finished）,I will have a dance class.I like danceing（改为dancing） because it gives myself （改为me）a chance to shape my body.I will pay a visit for（改为to） my grandma on sunday.I am look（改为looking） forward to that moment！I am surely（改为sure） we will have a good time.On Sunday night,I will watch my favourite programs（program） TV "HAPPY CAMP".I find it really interesting.It always makes me laugh out（删去out） loud.Besides.a lot stars appear in it.
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Answer 2

The weekend is coming! i will be busy as a bee. On saturday morning, i have to rush to my math class. after it is finished, i have a dance class. i like dancing because it gives me a chance to shape my body. i will pay a visit to my grandma on sunday. i am looking forward to that moment! i am sure we will have a good time. on sunday night, i will watch my favourite TV program " HAPPY CAMP". i find it really interesting. it always makes me laugh out loud. Besides, a lot of stars appear on it.