Question

英语作文求英语达人帮忙找出错误好让我改正

The Wonder Textile Factory mainly produces textiles.To you surprise,the textiles are made from high-quality and natural materials of wool and cotton,so they are environmentally and friendly.Not only this,but also The Wonder Textile Factory with ISO 2000 management system and professional teams is well-funded.
After reading these presentations,are you eager to take a look?Go to the Guangzhou Industrial Park.We will welcome your arrival!

Answer 1

　　第二行的第三个and去掉
　　Not only this改为Besides that，并去掉but also
　　第三行在with前加上is equipped
　　第四行is well-funded改为are well-established
　　第五行these presentations改为this presentation
　　第六行We will welcome your arrival!改为Your coming will be highly appreciated.

Answer 2

The Wonder Textile Factory mainly produces textiles made from natural wool and cotton of high-quality ,which is eco-friendly.Besides, the Wonder Textile Factory has a system of ISO 2000 management and professional teams is well-funded. If you are eager to take a look at the factory, welcome to Guangzhou Industrial Park.Your arrival will be greatly appreciated.

Answer 3

没什么语法错误，就是单词和标点符号相隔太近，例如这种： look?Go