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短文改错，谢谢Today,I saw a funny incident happening outside a grocery shop .Two litte kids were playing together happy.One was very fat with a large stomach,which was eating junk food . The other kid reached out or felt his stomach,joking ,"See how much big your stomach is,but you are still eating much!" I amused and looked down to an other kid, who was also eating junk food . I couldn't help laugh out as he was much fat with an even larger stomach!
In your opinion , it is no goodhaving too much junk food , which might be to blame on the fatness of children.

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Today,I saw a funny incident happening outside a grocery shop .Two litte kids were playing together happy(1.改成happily).One was very fat with a large stomach,which(2.改成who) was eating junk food . The other kid reached out or(3.改成and) felt his stomach,joking ,"See how much(4.掉这个much) big your stomach is,but you are still eating much!" I (5.此处加was)amused and looked down to an(6.改成the) other kid, who was also eating junk food . I couldn't help laugh(7.改成laughing) out as he was much fat(8.改成fatter) with an even larger stomach!
In your(9.改成my) opinion , it is no goodhaving too much junk food , which might be to blame on(10.改成for) the fatness of children.
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