拜托大神们帮我写英语作文吧，写的好我一定给分的，内容如下：
InTheAlchemist（一本书）,theshepherdboySantiagopursueshispersonallegendbytravelingtoastran...
In The Alchemist（一本书）, the shepherd boy Santiago pursues his personal legend by traveling to a strange country, working in a crystal shop, joining a caravan to Egypt, finding and leaving his love, learning lessons from the alchemist and the desert, listening to his heart, being transformed into the wind, looking in the wrong place for his treasure, surviving robbery robbery and assault, and eventually fulfilling his dream at the very place he had begun his journey.
What is your personal legend? Do you have a dream or goal that you have always wanted to accomplish? Which difficulties or challenges are you facing as you pursue your dream? What gives you inspiration and confidence on your life’s journey? How and when you will you achieve your personal?
题目就像To Be an Architect 或 To Solve Global Warming之类的。 写一段就行，6-8 sentences, 100-125 words, 老师很严格的，一点语法错误都不能有，比如冠词，单复数之类的一点不能错。我想写businessman,不过你如果觉得不好写可以写别的。不着急可以稍微慢点写的。但一定要是精品，这是我的final 展开
What is your personal legend? Do you have a dream or goal that you have always wanted to accomplish? Which difficulties or challenges are you facing as you pursue your dream? What gives you inspiration and confidence on your life’s journey? How and when you will you achieve your personal?
题目就像To Be an Architect 或 To Solve Global Warming之类的。 写一段就行，6-8 sentences, 100-125 words, 老师很严格的，一点语法错误都不能有，比如冠词，单复数之类的一点不能错。我想写businessman,不过你如果觉得不好写可以写别的。不着急可以稍微慢点写的。但一定要是精品，这是我的final 展开
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To Be An Architect
I always have a dream to be an architect, it striks me again and again, when I see great architectures, such as the Water Cubic and the Pyramid in La Louvre. But it is never an easy thing for me, though i draw well, building out the drawings to some physical structure is the real challenge. I once designed a little house myself, and i tried to build the model based on it. I failed twice, but I remembered the stools of Einsten. I know every achievment is the result of repeated failures and an accumulation of continued efforts. I will build that model house again in the coming winter holidays. I am stll young, I have time to develop the skills that it requires to realize my dream. I belive my love to architecture will serve as my best teacher.
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I always have a dream to be an architect, it striks me again and again, when I see great architectures, such as the Water Cubic and the Pyramid in La Louvre. But it is never an easy thing for me, though i draw well, building out the drawings to some physical structure is the real challenge. I once designed a little house myself, and i tried to build the model based on it. I failed twice, but I remembered the stools of Einsten. I know every achievment is the result of repeated failures and an accumulation of continued efforts. I will build that model house again in the coming winter holidays. I am stll young, I have time to develop the skills that it requires to realize my dream. I belive my love to architecture will serve as my best teacher.
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放在word上一大堆线，我不要求快我要的是精品，要基本没有错误的啊。
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不错，你会用WORD来查拼写和语法。用F7改一下就好了。举手之劳，
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To Be an Architect
I always have a dream to be an architect; it strikes me again and again, when I see great architectures, such as the Water Cubic and the Pyramid in La Louvre. But it is never an easy thing for me, though I draw well, building out the drawings to some physical structure is the real challenge. I once designed a little house myself, and I tried to build the model based on it. I failed twice, but I remembered the stools of Einstein. I know every achievement is the result of repeated failures and an accumulation of continued efforts. I will build that model house again in the coming winter holidays. I am still young; I have time to develop the skills that it requires to realize my dream. I believe my love to architecture will serve as my best teacher.
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To Be an Architect
1. It’s a lifestyle, not a job.
Architects typically tend to think about architecture all the time, I know I do. Not just the big ‘A’ type of buildings or projects, but every little thing from every where I go. I go somewhere and start looking at materials, form, massing, lighting, etc. If I take a trip somewhere, I start by planning it around the buildings I want to visit. Probably 90% of all the books I buy (not including children’s titles) are about architecture – I even put them on my Christmas list.
2. People respect architects.
Even if they don’t really understand what we do, there is a perception that architects are ethical and responsible and will endeavor to make the right decision to our own detriment. It’s part of the reason that ‘architect’ is chosen so often as the vocation for title characters in movie and TV roles. Architects aren’t generally viewed as driven by financial rewards like doctors or as scurrilous as lawyers (can be).
3. Job is constantly evolving.
Architects are not artists – we have to address building technology and programming. There are constantly evolving materials and construction methods out there and we are required as a profession to address the demands of the public at large (building performance, energy consumption, incorporating recycled materials, etc.). Architects create new design concepts that push how modern day construction is executed. Architecture is one of the few professions that is never static.
4. Artistic freedom and personal expression.
As an architect, we are given certain project parameters that help guide the direction of our projects. We are then given the freedom to pursue the artistic embodiment of those parameters. 10 architects with the same client and the same project parameters will provide 10 different solutions. Every time.
5. You can be your own boss.
You can be your own firm of one and still be a viable service provider on almost any size project. You can enter contests and win commissions for major projects by yourself – I can’t think of another vocation that can provide similar latitudes. I have also seen a team of 3 people design and prepare construction documents on a mall over 1,000,000 square feet.
6. There are tangible (and sometimes euphoric) results.
Anyone who has ever seen a building that they worked get built knows exactly what I am talking about. I am still excited to watch one of my projects getting built – it’s like having your own laboratory where you can experiment and refine things that you consider to be important and worthwhile. It ties into the artistic freedom listed in #4 but architects generally have a sense of ownership on every project they work.
7. We can positively impact peoples lives.
It is rewarding to develop a personal relationship with your client, particularly when you know that the process will yield a more fruitful end product. By understanding the process, our clients appreciate the product. By appreciating the product, they are acknowledging the role it plays.
8. Experimentation is expected.
Despite architecture having to contain building sciences and technology, the final esoteric product does not have a definitively right or wrong answer. Because no two architects will ever come up with the exact same solution given an identical set of parameters, there is a liberating sense that you are here for the purpose of imparting your own personality on the project. We are expected to try new things, explore different materials, and incorporate emerging technologies into every project.
9. Longevity of Career.
You can practice the profession of architecture for as long as you want – you’ll always be an architect even when it isn’t your job anymore. Most architects don’t really start to become good until later in life – I’m talking in their 50′s. I imagine that you have to come to some sort of understanding as to who you are as an individual before you can start to be consistent with imparting your imprint onto a building.
10. Incredible variety of options within the profession.
Unlike other professions, you graduate with a degree in architecture without having to know what type of architecture you are going to focus on. This is really great because when you graduate, you don’t know enough about the possibilities to know what you want to do. You can float between big and little firms, the role of project architect, designer, or management. You can work on building types from different market sectors like hospitality, residential, civic, retail, etc. and will still be an architect. Your degree will have a marketable value beyond the time of your immediate graduation.
1. It’s a lifestyle, not a job.
Architects typically tend to think about architecture all the time, I know I do. Not just the big ‘A’ type of buildings or projects, but every little thing from every where I go. I go somewhere and start looking at materials, form, massing, lighting, etc. If I take a trip somewhere, I start by planning it around the buildings I want to visit. Probably 90% of all the books I buy (not including children’s titles) are about architecture – I even put them on my Christmas list.
2. People respect architects.
Even if they don’t really understand what we do, there is a perception that architects are ethical and responsible and will endeavor to make the right decision to our own detriment. It’s part of the reason that ‘architect’ is chosen so often as the vocation for title characters in movie and TV roles. Architects aren’t generally viewed as driven by financial rewards like doctors or as scurrilous as lawyers (can be).
3. Job is constantly evolving.
Architects are not artists – we have to address building technology and programming. There are constantly evolving materials and construction methods out there and we are required as a profession to address the demands of the public at large (building performance, energy consumption, incorporating recycled materials, etc.). Architects create new design concepts that push how modern day construction is executed. Architecture is one of the few professions that is never static.
4. Artistic freedom and personal expression.
As an architect, we are given certain project parameters that help guide the direction of our projects. We are then given the freedom to pursue the artistic embodiment of those parameters. 10 architects with the same client and the same project parameters will provide 10 different solutions. Every time.
5. You can be your own boss.
You can be your own firm of one and still be a viable service provider on almost any size project. You can enter contests and win commissions for major projects by yourself – I can’t think of another vocation that can provide similar latitudes. I have also seen a team of 3 people design and prepare construction documents on a mall over 1,000,000 square feet.
6. There are tangible (and sometimes euphoric) results.
Anyone who has ever seen a building that they worked get built knows exactly what I am talking about. I am still excited to watch one of my projects getting built – it’s like having your own laboratory where you can experiment and refine things that you consider to be important and worthwhile. It ties into the artistic freedom listed in #4 but architects generally have a sense of ownership on every project they work.
7. We can positively impact peoples lives.
It is rewarding to develop a personal relationship with your client, particularly when you know that the process will yield a more fruitful end product. By understanding the process, our clients appreciate the product. By appreciating the product, they are acknowledging the role it plays.
8. Experimentation is expected.
Despite architecture having to contain building sciences and technology, the final esoteric product does not have a definitively right or wrong answer. Because no two architects will ever come up with the exact same solution given an identical set of parameters, there is a liberating sense that you are here for the purpose of imparting your own personality on the project. We are expected to try new things, explore different materials, and incorporate emerging technologies into every project.
9. Longevity of Career.
You can practice the profession of architecture for as long as you want – you’ll always be an architect even when it isn’t your job anymore. Most architects don’t really start to become good until later in life – I’m talking in their 50′s. I imagine that you have to come to some sort of understanding as to who you are as an individual before you can start to be consistent with imparting your imprint onto a building.
10. Incredible variety of options within the profession.
Unlike other professions, you graduate with a degree in architecture without having to know what type of architecture you are going to focus on. This is really great because when you graduate, you don’t know enough about the possibilities to know what you want to do. You can float between big and little firms, the role of project architect, designer, or management. You can work on building types from different market sectors like hospitality, residential, civic, retail, etc. and will still be an architect. Your degree will have a marketable value beyond the time of your immediate graduation.
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您写的那么长我怎么办啊，会一分也不给我的！
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你从中选几点呀，笨蛋
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