Question

高中英语翻译题（看我有无错误，有的话请指出错误并改正）

1.黄河是中国第二长河。
Yellow River is the second longest river in China.
2.长江比中国其他河流都要长。
Changjiang River is longer than any other river in China.
3.篮球打得好和歌唱得好让他成为学校里最受欢迎的男生之一。
He becomes one of the most popular boys in school as result of both playing basketball and singing well.

Answer 1

第三个不太对，原句的“成为”强调的是状态，而become强调的是动作。另外表示“……之一”，应该使用“the one of 名词复数”，是特指，所以用定冠词。

建议改为 He is the one of most popular boys in the school because of him playing basketball and singing well .

Answer 2

1、(the) Yellow River 须加定冠词

2、（the）Changjiang River 同上； any other river(s) 复数

3、 建议做如下修改，更符合英语表达习惯一些He becomes one of the most popular boys in school as his being good not only at playing basketball and but also at singing.

Answer 3

第三个错了，改正：Play basketball well and sing well let him become the most popular one of the boys.
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