Question

这句英语翻译是否正确？

我昨天在上周刚修好的购物中心内买了她最喜欢的钻戒.
I bought the diamond ring that she best likes yesterday in the shopping mall built last week.
请问以上这句话翻译是否有问题？另外请问如下：
① yesterday 在句子中属于什么语句，什么成分. 可否放到句子结尾？还是说句中句尾都可以？
② in the shopping mall 在句子中属于什么语句，什么成分？
谢谢。

Answer 1

Yesterday in the shopping mall built last week，I bought the diamond ring that she likes best.
yesterday修饰bought，in the shopping mall修饰bought，放前面棚凳更好，
以免误链迹旅解修饰州帆she likes best;

Answer 2

I bought her favorite diamond ring yesterday in the shopping mall built last week.这样翻译，会乎掘孝岁稿不会好一点散谨呢

Answer 3

翻译没问题

Answer 4

没什么大的问题基本上意思差不多

Answer 5

Yesterday l bought the diamond ring which she liked most in the shopping mall that opened last week.