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求英语帝看看这段有什么语法错误啊？

My favourite season is autumn，Because autumn the wind is cool, comfortable. When an intermittent fall breeze blow comes, I will feel will look
like a soft quilt to cover on mine body. In autumn, the weather is very cool，so I like wear a jacket and a shirt 。I like riding a bike with
my friends，We also take a camera，then We have a picnic on the hill. We also take many pictures. We feel very happy。我最喜欢的季节是秋天，因为秋天的风很酷、舒适。当一个间歇秋天的微风吹来,我将感到会看起来像一个柔软的被子盖在我的身体。因为秋天非常凉快，所以我喜
欢穿夹克和衬衫。我喜欢和我的朋友去骑自行车，带上一个照相机，然后我们去野餐在山上。我们还需要许多照片。我们感到非常高兴。
My favourite season is winter，because Sometimes, it will snow in winter，It's very beautiful。I like wear a thick coat and a sweaters in
winter，because It's very cold。I like to eat hot pot with my friends or my family in winter，because It's very Spicy and hot,but It is really
delicious。The Spring Festival is in winter，I most like to set off firecrackers and fireworks, that is very interesting! 我最喜欢的季节是冬天，因为有时，冬天会下雪，那是非常美丽的。我喜欢在冬天穿厚外套和毛衣，因为天气太冷了。我喜欢在冬天和朋友或者家人一起去吃火锅
，因为它是非常的麻辣。但是真的很美味。春节也在冬天，我最喜欢放鞭炮和烟花，那是非常有趣的！

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My favourite season is autumn，because the wind is cool and comfortable. When an intermittent breeze blow comes, I will feel
like a soft quilt covering on mine body. In autumn, the weather is very cool so that I would like to wear a jacket and a shirt . I like riding a bike with
my friends.We also take a camera with us，then we have a picnic on the hill. We also take many pictures. We feel very happy。

My favourite season is winter.Because sometimes it will snow in winter which is very beautiful.I like wearing a coat and a sweaters in
winter，because It's very cold.I like to eat hot pot with my friends or my family ，for It's very Spicy and hot,but It is really
delicious.The Spring Festival is in winter.What I love the most is to set off firecrackers and fireworks, That is very interesting!

你这段文章是用来干什么的？里面的用词很多重复，like的基本用法是：like to do sth, like doing sth， like sth

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有道翻译的，谢谢你了！

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