Question

我要写一段英语的自我介绍，一下是我写的，希望你们帮我看一下有什么语法错误，好进一步改善。谢谢啦

Hello,my name is ***,i'm glad to meet you today.speak to me ,many people who have known well about me think that i'm a crazy and active girl. all right,you must to know i'm only 18 thati'm at the young age. without a doubt,i'm have enough energy to enrich and enjoy my life. certainly,i'm not always so and sometime when i in a public place where have many strangers that i need to face, i will be nervous and quiet. it is my weakness that i have trying to correct. If you willing to make friend with me ,you will find many interesting things from me.This is me, just simple, happy.

Answer 1

must to know 没有to
without a doubt不需要加a
,i'm have 没有am
so and sometime 这是嘛
have trying改成should try就好
willing to make 前面加are
make friend friend加上s
, just simple, happy 结尾加上me

追问

without a doubt是固定的短语哦。i'm not awalys so.我并不是一直如此。是这样说吗？

追答

对的呢 你很聪明呢 a加或者不加都行

追问

嗯，非常谢谢你。

追答

那就采纳把 亲