Question

英语达人，请进！

maybe,it is only one important reason to make me be strong that you are always stay with me ! 这个句子在表达上有问题么？是否语句有毛病呢，感觉读到that 好像句子怪怪的，会不会呢？

Answer 1

maybe,it is only one important reason to make me be strong that you are always stay with me 改为主语从句，而且后面的“你永远与我同在”翻译时，如果你想用stay，又用be动词的话就要用be doing，没有be do这种形式的。有误哦，细心一点。翻译：可能，只有唯一一个重要原因使我坚强，那就是你总是伴我左右。正确形式：Maybe the only one reason for me to be strong is that you are always here with me!希望可以帮到你，不满意可追问。

追问

谢谢哦，你的翻译确实是我要表达的意思，不过我那句怎么会出现那么多语法问题呢？呵呵

Answer 2

你好！

有误。更地道准确的表达参考如下：

Maybe the only one reason for me to be strong is that you are always here with me!

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Answer 3

的确很多语病，我帮你修改下：
【Maybe, there's only one important reason to make me strong, that is, you're always with me.】
翻译：可能，只有唯一一个重要原因使我坚强，那就是你总是伴我左右。

已为你翻译好，请查收，若有疑问及时追问，满意敬请采纳，O(∩_∩)O谢谢~~

追问

那这里that 这样改的话，是不是就变成一个陈述句里的简单句呢？

追答

是的，用that is，进一步解释，符合说话时候的错落有致。

Answer 4

Maybe，that you are always with me is the only one important reason to make me be strong.
改为主语从句，而且后面的“你永远与我同在”翻译时，如果你想用stay，又用be动词的话就要用be doing，没有be do这种形式的。

Answer 5

maybe,it is only one important reason that you always stay with me to make me strong !
这样就好多了

追问

如果是这样写没错吗？

追答

Maybe, the only and important reason is that you always stay with me， which makes me strong!

这样绝对没问题。其实主要是看你想强调什么,英语中强调的部分通常放在前面，你要强调就把哪部分放在前面，当然了，句子也得重新组织。像这句强调的是‘原因’是‘你跟我在一起’。

Answer 6

Maybe the only important reason to make me strong is that you always stay with me.