Question

帮我修改一篇英语作文，看看有没有语法错误或者是句子不通顺，快~~~O(∩_∩)O谢谢

Katherine , one of my best friend . She is who I'd like to say thanks to . When I am in trouble , she is always pull me out at first . However ,she also share her favourite things with me in order to make me happy . Whether I am happy or sad , she is together with me all the time . So I want to say to her "Thank you . It's nice you are around me ".
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Answer 1

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；请注意分段。 When I am in trouble, she is always pull me out at first. [句子错误] 语法错误，建议将be+副词+动词原形改为副词+动词原形。Whether I am happy or sad , she is together with me all the time. [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！It's nice you are around me ". [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

Answer 2

Katherine , one of my best friends. She is someone who I'd like to say thanks to . When I am in trouble , she always pulls me out at first . However ,she also shares her favourite things with me in order to make me happy . Whether I am happy or not , she keeps mecompany all the time . So I want to say "Thank you” to her ".. It's nice of you。

Answer 3

friend用复数，