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Energy is the basis of social development, the source of problems between socio-economic development, social stability and national security. Energy associated with our lives, if not energy, on the night lighting, a car fixed, and so on, we will not be able to carry on living
帮忙看下上面有那些语法错误,改正一下,万分感激!!
能源是社会的根本，为社会的发展，它关系到社会经济发展，社会稳定和国家安全。能源与我们生活密切相关，在我们的日常生活中，如果没有它，夜晚没有灯光，汽车不能行驶等，我们将不能够继续生活下去。

Answer 1

1.the source前+and.两个分句之间必须有连接
2.problems是特定的，所以要+the
3."energy is associated ...."句子里必须有动词
4."if not energy"改成without energy
5.最后应该写：we'll face many problems such as night lighting, car moving,...we could not live on the earth any more.

Answer 2

Energy is the basic needs for social development, which are the roots of problems between socio-economic development, social stability and national security. Energy associated closely with our daily lives, without which, such as lightis, running a car, and so on, we will not be able to carry on with life.

Answer 3

Energy is the basis of social development,——(1)需加个连词）and also the source of problems（2）根据句意分析，应该是说能源是所有这些问题的根源，应该用“problems on”而不是“between”——on socia-economic development,social stability and national security.Energy is—— （3）“associate with”词组一般指合作，协作，与我们生活相关，用“relevant to”——tightly relevant to our daily lives.If there is no energy,（4)——there will be no light at night;cars will not be able to move and so on.We will not be able to carry on living.