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ItwasMonday.Iwasthefirststudenttocomingtotheclassroom.WhenIcametomyseat,Ifoundthatmyb... It was Monday . I was the first student to coming to the classroom . When I came to my seat , I found that my bench was broken . Seeing there had nobody around . I had an idea . I decided to exchange bench with Wang Gang, his seat was just behind my seat.And so I did . After a while,Wang Gang came in . When he saw the broken bench , he carried it out the classroom . Wondering how he was going to do , I went out and found that he has begun to repair the broken bench . My face went red immediate . He got a hammer and spoken to me , “Let’s repair it together .” 展开
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我把该段的原文找到了。你按照这篇短文找出答案即可。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。
增加:
It was Monday. Li Ming was the first come to the classroom. When he
加to
came into his seat, therefore, he found his bench was broken. Seen there was
however seeing
nobody around, he decided to change it with Wang Gang, and so he did. After
Wang Gang’s
a while, Wang Gang came. When he saw a broken bench, he carried it out
the
of the classroom. Li Ming didn’t know how he was going to do. So Li Ming
what
came out of and found that Wang Gang has begun to repair the broken bench.
去掉of had
Li Ming’s face turned red. He said with Wang Gang, “Let’s repair them
To it
together.”
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coming改成come
there had nobody around。had改成was
exchange the bench with Wang Gang‘s,这里有两个错误。
his seat was just。。。his改成whose
carried it out of the classroom
wondering how he was。。。。how改成what
后面has begun改成had begun
immediate改成immediately
spoken to me。spoken改成spoke
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不好意思、本来就是 spoke   、是我不小心打错成了spoken。
也就是说还有一个错误
可是我们老师说基本上10个错误里面,要增加一个单词、删去一个单词、有8个单词是要改换的
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哦,那我再看下。    
coming改成come
there had nobody around。had改成was
exchange the bench ,原来那个错误不用改了,我确定!
his seat was just。。。his改成whose
came in后面的in去掉
carried it out of the classroom
wondering how he was。。。。how改成what
后面has begun改成had begun
immediate改成immediately

还有一个的话,我是参考别的回答,但是个人觉得原文没什么问题。
came to my seat改成came into my seat
这样就符合你的要求了,一个增一个删、八个改,希望能帮到你。
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