Question

请帮忙看下面这篇短文有没有错误点!？

Answer 1

He does his best to know where and when there is going to be a football match.改为：He does his best to know where and when a football match is going to be.
"It my father,Mrs Black."改为"It's my father,Mrs Black.",1,he thinks hardly and finds a way,2,最后一句 应该是it's my father,还有就是有些语句虽然表达正确，但是明显是中式英语，不太符合英语的表达，如果能修改就更好了,0,请帮忙看下面这篇短文有没有错误点!
Peter is thirteen years old.He is in Grade Two this year.He likes to play football and watch football matches.And he often reads newspapers.He does his best to know where and when there is going to be a football match.
Now Peter is having lunch.He is listening to the radio,too.He is very happy because there is going to be a nice football match on TV at four this afternoon.He wants to watch it very much.But he is going to have English and Chinese lessons.He thinks hard and finds a way.
"Hello,Mrs Black,"Peter says to his teacher on the telephone,"Peter is ill in bed.He wants to ask for half a day's leave."
"Oh,I'm sorry to hear that," says Mrs Black."But who's that?"
"It my father,Mrs Black."