Question

英文诗《糖果之王》的翻译，急急急，在线等！！

The Candy King There was a king who loved Halloween He waited each year for this scary scene. He sneaked out to hang on his door Black bats and witches and spooks galore. The midnight hour was his favorite time With monsters covering snakes with slime. As twelve o'clock chimed through the stars He opened up his snickers bars. 　　　　　　　—Boudi Gouge 　　　　　　　　Uni
The Candy King

There was a king who loved Halloween
He waited each year for this scary scene.
He sneaked out to hang on his door
Black bats and witches and spooks galore.

The midnight hour was his favorite time
With monsters covering snakes with slime.
As twelve o'clock chimed through the stars
He opened up his snickers bars.

　　　　　　　—Boudi Gouge
　　　　　　　　Unicoi Middle School
　　　　　　　　Erwin, Tennessee

Answer 1

The Candy King There was a king who loved Halloween He waited each year for this scary scene. He sneaked out to hang on his door Black bats and witches and spooks galore. The midnight hour was his favorite time With monsters covering snakes with slime. As twelve o'clock chimed through the stars He opened up his snickers bars. 　　　　　　　—Boudi Gouge 　　　　　　　　Uni翻译：糖果国王有一个国王特别喜欢万圣节他等待着每年这可怕的一幕。他偷偷溜到挂在门口的黑蝙蝠,女巫和间谍买单。午夜时分是他最喜欢的时间与怪物与黏液覆盖蛇。作为十二点打通过星星他打开了他的巧克力棒。-Boudi圆凿Uni
The Candy King

There was a king who loved Halloween
He waited each year for this scary scene.
He sneaked out to hang on his door
Black bats and witches and spooks galore.

The midnight hour was his favorite time
With monsters covering snakes with slime.
As twelve o'clock chimed through the stars
He opened up his snickers bars.

　　　　　　　—Boudi Gouge
　　　　　　　　Unicoi Middle School
　　　　　　　　Erwin, Tennessee翻译：糖果国王有一个国王特别喜欢万圣节他等待着每年这可怕的一幕。他偷偷溜到挂在门口的黑蝙蝠,女巫和间谍买单。午夜时分是他最喜欢的时间与怪物与黏液覆盖蛇。作为十二点打通过星星他打开了他的巧克力棒。-Boudi圆凿Unicoi中学欧文,田纳西州

追问

亲，你这是用在线翻译弄的吧，没有逻辑诶。。。

追答

我都不怎么懂

Answer 2

糖果之王

从前有一个国王特别喜欢万圣节
他每年都等着这一恐怖的时刻到来
他偷偷的跑出去
当到处都是黑蝙蝠、女巫和幽灵时

午夜是他最喜欢的时间
当各种各样的怪物出现时
当午夜悄悄过去后
国王打开了他的巧克力棒

绝对不是机翻，不过我自己也感觉怪怪的