Question

下面这句话怎么翻译好？，

我需要是比较好的翻译，不是随便的。能让人一听就觉得这个人英语还是不错的那种。
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如果我有幸能进入复旦大学学习，我会努力完成以下计划：第一，我将系统地学习法律研究生的课程，认真汲取老师们传授的知识，弥补自己在法律方面的不足；第二，我想广泛阅读图书馆里的书，特别是历史书和推理书。

Answer 1

如果我有幸能进入复旦大学学习，我会努力完成以下计划：
If i am lucky enough to gain admission to the Fudan University,i will strive hard to accomplish the following plans;

第一，我将系统地学习法律研究生的课程，认真汲取老师们传授的知识，弥补自己在法律方面的不足；
Firstly,I will learn the course of a law master systematically, pay serious attention to gain the knowledge imparted by the teacher,enhance my weakness in the aspect of law.

第二，我想广泛阅读图书馆里的书，特别是历史书和推理书。
Secondly. I want to read the library books extensively especially books on history and reasoning.

Answer 2

If I am fortunate enough to be admitted by Fudan University, I will work hard to complete my plans: first, I will comprehensively study the courses of law-majored graduates, draw useful knowledge delivered by professors and make up for my lacks in the study of laws. Besides, I plan to read books in the library far and wide, especially the books in the realm of history and logic.
我不知道你这段话是用来口试说的还是书面写的，如果是前者，那么别为了准求让人觉得英语不错而用太大太空的词汇，这样反而听起来不自然，多念几遍，修改到顺口自然最重要，可以多用一些口语的连词。供你参考。

Answer 3

能让人一听就觉得这个人英语还是不错的那种。

还真有这号恬不知耻的人~

Answer 4

如果我有幸能进入复旦大学学习，我会努力完成以下计划：第一，我将系统地学习法律研究生的课程，认真汲取老师们传授的知识，弥补自己在法律方面的不足；第二，我想广泛阅读图书馆里的书，特别是历史书和推理书。
I will try my best to finished the fellowing plans if i am lucky enough to be admitted by FuDan University.

First of all, study the course of a law master systmatically. digest the knowledge that delivered by teachers.and remedy the my insufficent law knowledge.

Secondly: read the as much book as i can in the liberary, especially about History and logical.