Question

帮忙看一下这段有没有语法错误。 仔细一点，会多给分的

The most interesting andexciting book I have ever read
Many people have
read Harry potter this book before
his middle school, I think. And so do I. I have already finish read this book
in primary school. I read the book and watch the movie. It’s a characteristic
style of works and the story attracts my mostly attention because this story is
exciting, interesting, a little scary and carry me away. I think this is the
most interesting and exciting book I have ever read.
The story is about
a boy who is called Harry Potter’s fantastic bitter experience. The boy is
intelligent, brave and friendly. He has two better friend than any other, their
name are Hermione Granger and Ron. They are unite but there is also a little
stick to one’s position.
The story teach us
many things. Such as never forgive when the difficulty happed and make more
friends. study hard.
Do better, andhappier.

Answer 1

Many people haveread Harry potter this book before改为Many people haveread “Harry potter” before.书名和this book 重复了 I read the book and watch the movie时态改掉 改成现在完成时 抱歉你错太多了不好改 不如你发汉语过来我跟你翻译

追问

《哈利波特》是我最喜欢的书之一。
哈利波特诞生于一个魔法家庭。他有两个很好的伙伴，赫敏和罗恩，尽管他们有时候也会有点不和，但大部分时间都是并肩作战。他们机智、勇敢、聪明、团结，组成了坚不可摧的三人组。
这本书告诉了我们许多许多，面对困难不放弃，交更多的朋友等等。这本书有趣、刺激，意义深刻。
语言最好简单一点，如果有太难的词尽量换一换，可以改变文意。谢谢了。

追答

我翻译的比较简单啊
都是直译
"Harry Potter" is one of my favorite books.
Harry Potter was born in a magical family. He had two good partners, Hermione and Ron, although they are not and sometimes a little, but most of the time are fought side by side. They witty, brave, smart, unity, composed of indestructible trio.
This book tells us many, many face difficult not to give up, and make more friends. This book interesting, stimulating, profound significance.