Question

求英语高手帮忙，检查一下下面的英语有没有语法错误，谢谢。

Owing to I notice and appreciate beauty ,excellence, and skilled performance in all domain of life ,from nature to art to mathematics to science to everyday experience . And the crucial part of who i am is thinking of new way to things . I am never content with doing something in a conventional way if a better way is possible.

Answer 1

I notice and appreciate the beauty ,strive for excellence,and also have skilled performance in my life .from nature to art , mathematics,science and everyday experience .And the crucial part is the way in which I think the things. I will never content with doing something in a conventional way if there may be a better way .

改好了，应该问题不大，老实说你这个实在是。。。

Answer 2

Owing to the fact that I notice and appreciate beauty, excellence, and skilled performance in all domains of life from nature, art, mathematics, science to everyday experience, the crucial part of who I am is thinking of new ways of doing things. I am never content with doing something in a conventional way if a better way is possible.