Question

英语句子改错。。。

With the exam holding tomorrow,I can't do shopping with you.
能详细点解释不？谢谢！
可以改成，with the exam to be held tomorrow,Ican't go shopping with you .么？

Answer 1

1. 这两个短句是因果关系，而且后面的句子里面已经出现过一个with了，重复太多不好。所以将With改成As会比较好

2. 第一个短句
- 缺少be动词
- exam不是主语，所以hold应该用被动式，除非换其他的单词

3.第二个短句 go shopping是一个词组，一般是一起用的所以要把do改成go

所以最后的修改建议如下：
As the exam will be held tomorrow, I can't go shopping with you.
As the exam is going to be held tomorrow, I can't go shopping with you.

Answer 2

有hold an exam这个说法吗？？我觉得应该改成
With an exam to take tomorrow, I can't go shopping with you.
最好在最后加上时间，是什么时候不能陪你去购物。而且我感觉应该不需要用被动形式吧。

Answer 3

With the exam tomorrow, I can't go shopping with you.
直接用exam就好，do 如果用的话就翻译成 做购物 了。

Answer 4

应该把第一个With改为Because of。根据句意可知，说话者前一句表达的应该是后一句不能一起去购物的原因，而with没有表示原因的用法。with的具体用法http://dict.baidu.com/s?wd=with希望对你有帮助

Answer 5

1. I cannot go shopping with you as I am having exam tomorrow. 比较有生活化吧？？
2. The exam holds tomorrow,I cannot go shopping with you.

Answer 6

可以用独立主格，相当于with的复合结构
The exam to be held tomorrow,Ican't go shopping with you.