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Aperformanceinourcityismakingpeopletothinkmoreabouttheoveruseofplasticbags.Infrontofa... A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags .In front of a supermarket ,five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd .The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones .Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were collected by 700students from asecondary school .On that day ,after leaving the food markets ,customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need .Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours . 展开
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A performance in our city is making (making改为 to make) people to (to 去掉) think more about the overuse of plastic bags .In front of a supermarket ,five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd .The performance called on people to use less (less改为more) cloth bags instead of plastic ones .Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from (from改为by) customer (改为复数customers) in (in改为from) two food markets and all (此处增加the) others were collected by 700 students from a secondary school .On that day ,after leaving the food markets ,customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we (we改为they) didn't need .Several hundreds (hundreds改为hundred of ,无复数格式) plastic bags were collected for (改为within) just two hours .
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A performance in our city is making people to thinking more about the overuse of plastic bags .In front of a supermarket ,five volunteer wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd .The performance called on people to use less clothes bags instead of plastic ones .Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were be collected by 700students from asecondary school .On that day ,after leaving the food markets ,customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need .Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours .
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