Question

修改病句，并说明病因

He was "listening"(A) "attentively"(B) in class,his eyes "were fixed"(C) on the blackboard.

请仔细回答，谢谢！（引号内的内容为A B C选项内容。）

Answer 1

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• 正确答案是：去掉 were 或者在 his eyes 前加and。

【解析】：

1. He was  listening attentively  in class,his eyes fixed on the blackboard.

2. He was  listening attentively  in class, and his eyes were fixed on the blackboard.

   上课时，他认真听讲，眼睛凝视着黑板。

病句错就错在：

1、两个简单句必须用and 连接，改法为2。

2、如果要是独立主格做伴随状语，去掉 were， his eyes 是 fixed on the blackboard 的逻辑主语，改法为1。

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追问

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追答

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Answer 2

He was "listening"(A) "attentively"(B) in class, his eyes "were fixed"(C) on the blackboard.
选项C错了。
应该把were去掉。因为这不是两个并列句，没有and并列。我们可以把his eyes "were fixed"(C) on the blackboard改成【独立主格结构his eyes " fixed"(C) on the blackboard】。

Answer 3

C是错的，一个句子不会有两个简单句，去掉were