Question

英语翻译求教！！！

I had a thing ask to you that I made some Chinese knot
我有一件事情告诉你，我制作以一些“中国结”
大家看我翻译的对吗？？？
我的英语句子写对了吗？？

Answer 1

一般不用 a thing 习惯上用 something如果实在要强调【一件】就用 one thing
有事想说用一般现在时就可以了
告诉你用tell you ask you是问你 的意思
knots你做了some一些中国结所以要用复数形式

推荐翻译：

I have something to tell you. I have made some Chinese knots.

Answer 2

英文句子有语法错误。我的理解是您要把下面的句子翻译成英文。
我有一件事情告诉你，我制作以一些“中国结”。

I have something to tell you, I had made some Chinese knots. 或者
I want to tell you something, I have made some Chinese knots.

Answer 3

对的。不过把以改成了才不会变成病句

Answer 4

I have a thing to tell you that I have made some Chinese knots，这样比较好，有疑问请追问～

Answer 5

翻译：我有一件事求你，我做了一些中国结。

追问

我写的英语句子对吗？？？

追答

语法错误