Question

英文口语翻译，求助高手

希望尽量口语化的，不要机器翻译的

翻译下面内容：

<我想接受多方面（想表达中西方不同的意思）的教育，丰富自己的知识储备，进一步提高自己的创新能力。没国学校的教育制度能培养（提高）学生自主学习和实践能力>

Answer 1

我想接受多方面（想表达中西方不同的意思）的教育，丰富自己的知识储备，进一步提高自己的创新能力。没国学校的教育制度能培养（提高）学生自主学习和实践能力>

I would like to receive manifold / all-around / comprehensive / many-sided / multi-aspect education, enriching the reserve and storage of my personal knoweldge and promoting my own innovative capability , The education systems of American School can cultivate / train and improve the students' autonomous learning and practical ability.

Answer 2

I want to accept many (in the West would like to express different meanings) education, enrich their knowledge base, to further improve their ability to innovate. No school education system in the country to cultivate (improve) independent learning and practice
我要接受很多（在西想表达不同的含义）教育，丰富自己的知识基础，进一步提高他们的创新能力。无学校教育体系，在全国培育提高自主学习和实践

Answer 3

服了，口语化一点吧，这人明显有什么interview的。
What I want is a kind of different education,not only Chinese,to get more knowledge and improve my creative ability. So,I believe American education system can make it for me,like improve the ability of self-studying and practise.

Answer 4

What I want to receive is a kind of tolerate education in order to enrich my knowledge and further improve my creative ability.
The American (美国？不是没国！)school education system education focus on cultivating and improving the students' abilities of independent learning and practicing.
祝你开心如意！

追问

tolerate education,好像不太合适？？

accept是不是表示的主动一点

追答

你好！你问的两个都是关键词。
tolerate education 其实一般意思专业人士都知道——“兼收并蓄的教育；多元化教育”，这是最地道的表达之一。
另外，receive不能用accept替换，尽管它们是近义词。原因是accept强调【收到并留下；接受（观点看法、建议等）】。而“接受教育”，通常要用receive/get education.　　

追问

这样说如何

I want to receive tolerate education/comprehensive education ,in order to enrich my knowledge store.

I want to further enhance my creative ability.

我想接受多方面的教育，丰富自己的知识储备，想进一步提高自己的创新能力。想简单一点

追答

【enrich my knowledge store】这是典型的Chnglish,汉式英语.
“丰富我的知识储备”，对应英语就是【enrich my knowledge 】，不能加store。
这正如“提高我的英语水平”，应该是【improve my English】一样。
你直接这样说就行了：
I want to receive tolerate education/comprehensive education （in order可省略） to enrich my knowledge .
这一句 I want to further enhance my creative ability.
尽管简短，并不可取。因为，用词过于浓缩，太书面化，听起来费劲呢。
口语交际原则：该长则长，和短则短；简洁明了，表情达意。

Answer 5

I want to accept many-sided education including Eastern and Western culture, in order to enrich my knowledge store, further enhance my creative ability. The education institution of American school can foster students abilities of independent study and self-practice.
我自己翻译的，希望对你有帮助！望采纳~

追问

I want to further enhance my creative ability

中间有点罗嗦，该成这句如何

追答

可以。