Question

在读证明英文版求高手修改

求哪位好心人帮忙看下这份在读证明有什么需要修改的地方

证明
XXX,女,学号NNN,身份证号MMM,该生2010年6月通过参加全国普通高考被我校录取,2010年9月进入我校商学院本科旅游管理专业学习.现正修读大学三年级下学期课程.
特此证明.

Certificate of Studying

This is to certifythatXXX, female, Student No.NNN, ID No.MMM, whopassed China’s National College Entrance Examination on June, 2010 and admittedby Business School, Guangxi University on September, 2010.Her major is TourismManagement. This junior is studying in her second semester.

This letter willbe the only proof of the truth of her status.

Answer 1

Conference Letter

Name:***
Gender:female,
Identification number:******
The purpose of this letter is that to confirm this student was accepted by Guangxi University through attending the national entrance examination of college and also passed them on June 2010. The study of tourism management was started in business school of University on Septemer 2010. This student doing her third year courses at the moment.

Thank you