Question

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Sometimes I like to read books so that I can enter into a different world.When I read a story,my mind get lost in story.I think that I am part of them.I picture what the people in the book look like,what they are worn,and what kind of houses they have.I can "see" what is happening on each page but discover things I did no know.
Other times I like to read books to learn fact .Do you know that an animal can run fast than a car over short distances?I can also learn about history by read books.This is what I learned who was the first president of the US and which is the oldest country in the world。

Answer 1

第一段:
第一排:去掉into,因为enter是及物动词,后面直接跟宾语,无需介词.

第一排:get--gets,因为主语my mind为单三人称.

第二排:story--the story,因为再次提到某物时,应用定冠词the .

第二排:wore--wearing (are wearing为现在进行时)

第三排:but--and

第三排:did no know --do not know (no修饰名词, not修饰动词;并且,应该用一般现在时)

第二段:
第一排:fact--facts (此处用复数形式表示类别)

第一排:fast--faster,后面有than,应用比较级.

第二排:by read--by reading
(by是介词,后面要用动名词:by doing sth. 通过/依靠做某事)

第二排: what--how
(表语从句中主谓宾都不缺,所以不能用what引导表语从句,而只能用how来引导,并在从句中作状语)

Answer 2

get改为gets,.I picture what the people in the book look like,what they are worn改为 I think about what the people looks like in the book,what they wears, but discover things I did no know.改为 but
I don't know how they discover things