Question

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摘要：
在网络应用日益普及的今天，OA办公自动化系统是目前企事业单位提高办公效率和机构精简改革趋势的一个要求。采用OA办公自动化系统办公不仅可以实现资源共享、提高办公效率，而且也可以使工作人员的办公更加轻松自如，同时也节减了许多不必要的开支。OA办公自动化系统已经越来越多地进入到各级单位的日常工作中。系统开发任务主要包括前台界面的设计和后台数据库管理的设计。
经过详细的分析和调查，本设计采用Micrisoft ASP 作为开发工具，后台数据库采用Access数据库设计，利用ADO数据库访问技术实现对数据库的各种管理操作，实现无纸化网络办公的基本功能及管理功能。设计过程中，首先建立了系统的应用原型，然后在此基础上进行需求迭代，详细设计时不断修正和完善，经过测试阶段反复调试和验证，最终形成达到设计要求的可行程序。

Answer 1

Today with the growing popularity of application of the Internet, OA office automation system becomes a requested trend for the rise of working efficiency of the office and enterprises and institutions’s streamline reform. OA office automation system can not only realize the sharing of resources and the rise of working efficiency, but also it can make the staff more ease, and it also can save a number of unnecessary expenses. OA office automation system has become more and more popularity in various units’ daily work. System development task mainly includs the outlook’s interface design and database management design of the background.
After the detailed analysis and investigation, this design uses Micrisoft ASP as a development tool, and the background database using Access database design. Through the ADO database browsing technology the various management operations of database can come true, to achieve the basal functions of paperless office network and management functions. In the design process, first the prototype of a system is established, and the basis of demand for this iteration is next then carrying on, therefore the detailed design is refined and improved. Through the repeated testing and verification debugging ,and it can eventually form to meet the practical procedures of the design requirements .
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Answer 2

Today which popularizes day by day in the network application, the OA office automation system is the present Enterprises and institutions raises the office efficiency and an organization simplification reform tendency request. Uses the OA office automation system work not only to be possible to realize the resource sharing, to raise the office efficiency, moreover might also cause staff's work to be more relaxed, simultaneously also has cut freely down on many nonessential expenditures. The OA office automation system already more and more entered to all levels of unit's routine work. The system development mission mainly includes the onstage contact surface the design and the backstage data bank administration design. undergoes the detailed analysis and the investigation, this design uses Micrisoft ASP to take the development kit, the backstage database uses the Access database design, realizes using the ADO database visit technology to the database each kind of management operation, realizes the paperless network work basic function and the management function. Designs in the process, first has established system's application prototype, then based on this carries on the demand iteration, when detailed design revises unceasingly and consummates, debugs repeatedly after the test phase and confirms, forms finally achieves the design requirements the feasible procedure.