Question

2013.07.08英语题【要过程】

用比较高级的英语翻译下面句子：
(1)今年是我收获最少的一年，尽管我付出了很多。
(2)今天的毕业典礼既代表着六年中学生活的结束，又标志着一段新的人生经历的开始。
不要机器翻译！

Answer 1

1. Even after the huge amount of effort i've putted in, this is the year that i've gained the least.
2. The graguation ceremony, held today, marks not only the ending of six years of high school also the beginning of a new phase in life.

PS
(1) They are the least gains I've ever had this year after so much efforts;

这句虽然本意没有错但是少连接词，比如说‘even’
(2) The graduation ceremony today marks the ending of six-year school life and the beginning of a new phase of the life.

同上，本意没有大碍只是句子不成熟。比如少一些punctuation(标点)。同时，是 ‘in life.' 不是’of the life.' 没有大的错误，一般老师会认可。

追问

（1）连接词even加在哪里？
（2）punctuation(标点)加在哪里？
就像你上面修改的那样？

追答

1. They are the least gains I've ever had this year even after so much efforts;
   

   我上面改的和这句你选一个好了。

2. 嗯。
   

追问

第二句的“also”能改成“, but also”吗？

Answer 2

(1) They are the least gains I've ever had this year after so much efforts;
(2) The graduation ceremony today marks the ending of six-year school life and the beginning of a new phase of the life.
仅供参考，望能帮助到你，呵呵！

追问

第一题为什么用“They are ”？

追答

They 指的是gains. 当然了，也可换为there. 翻译有很多表达方式，但无论怎么变化，只要不跑题，让句子不发生歧义同时也符合英语表达即可。

Answer 3

1. Although I spent a lot, I gained the least in this year.

2. The graduation ceremony today is not only standing for the end of the six years high school life, but it also signs a new life's beginning.

Answer 4

(1)This year is one year that l obtained the least ,though I put in my heart on it.
(2)Today,the graduation ceremony means the end of the six-year middle school life, and marks the beginning of a new life journey.

Answer 5

though I work so hard this year, I gain the least
Today's graduation ceremony is both means the end of the six-year middle school life, and marks the beginning of a new life journey.

追问

is both means 这里没有语法错误？

追答

不好意思，
is去掉

Answer 6

1. I‘ve achieved the least this year, despite of the endeavor over the whole year.

2. The graduation ceremony to be held today severs not only as the endding of our six years' studying life, but the beginging of our new life as well.
   

追问

to be held 能改为is held吗？

追答

不可以。 to be held 是后置定语，意为即将举行的
也可用 held 意为举行的，不强调时间

追问

第二句里的'severs'是什么意思？

追答

serve as 作为
severs not only as the endding 不仅是结束