高一英语短文改错,急~

一共十处明天中午就要用的。谢谢~AgirlcalledJenniferlefthomethreedaysbefore.Shewanderedaboutinthestree... 一共十处 明天中午就要用的。谢谢~ A girl called Jennifer left home three days before.She wandered about in the street ,tired and hungrily.She could no longer bear it,but she made up her mind to return home.On her way back to home,she was wondering how her parents would react after the three day of her disappearance.Returning home,she saw a note lay on the table in the kitchen room.Her father went out after she made some coffee. Her mother was so tired that she slept soundly .Instead waking her.Jennifer lay beside her mother and go to sleep soon.When she was awake,she found she wasn't in her mother room and her old and dirty clothes were gone.She was in her own comfortable and warm bed in her pajamas(睡衣) 展开
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1.before 改为ago2.hungrily改为hungry 3.back to home把to去掉4.three day 改为three days5.lay-laying6.lay beside -laid beside7.go-went8.mother-mother's9.instead-instead of (这句话有点问题)10.after she made some coffee-after he made some coffee
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第一句before→ago;第二句hungrily→hungry;第三句but→so;第四句to去掉;第五句lay→lying;第六句after→so;第七句soundly→sound;第八句instead后面加of;第九句go→went;第十句mother→mother's
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