Question

英语达人进来看看我翻译英文的对不对

老伴60多岁中风去世时，那位72岁的退休教授不胜悲痛。无人依靠的生活对他来说将是非常困难的。
我翻译的： The retired professor in seventy-two is grievous(这个单词不会用，不知道对不对）very much when his wife died with stroke in sixty(六十多岁不会写）,rely on nobady else for him is going to be difficult.
is___very much 这里面的单词一定要是形容词性吗？

第二句话：两位业余画家上个月在伦敦举办了一次个人画展。许多人前去参观，其中包括一些著名的专业画家。
我翻译的： Two amateur painter hold a personal art exhibition in london last month. Many people visited (going to visit?) including some famous ____artists(专业的不会写）
各位达人看看我单词词性或者时态语法用得不对的，谢谢啦

Answer 1

首先，“72岁的退休教授”如果表达为 the 72 year old professor 会更好。

然后，is grievous 时态不对，这事已过去，应该用 was grievous。 还有死于中风的 die with 应该改为 die from.

在她六十多岁 的表达是：at her sixties. rely on nobady(单词写错) else for him is going to be difficult 建议改为：rely on nobody is going to be difficult for him.

is___very much 这里面的单词一定要是形容词性吗？在你的句子里是要用形容词。

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谢谢啊

Answer 2

以下是正确的翻译：
That 72-year-old professor was much too grievous when his wife died in her sixties。The life will be very hard for him who has nobody else to rely on。
Two amateur painters held a personal art exhibition in london last month and many people including some famous specialized artists went to see it。

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不胜悲痛还有别的表达方法吗？为什么72岁教授就要用你写的这种表达方式，而60多岁老伴就用in sixties呢 能说his sixties wife died with stroke吗？我还有好多句子要翻译，以后再想请教你怎么找到你？ 我学单词很死，背下来不知道该怎么用，给个建议呗

追答

具体岁数的用xx-year -old
几十多岁时，如：in one's 20s/60s(twenties/sixties。
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Answer 3

你好。以下是我的翻译。
1 It made the 72-year-old retired professor very sad when his wife died from apoplexy in her 60s. For him it was really hard to live without anyone to rely on for daily existence

2 (The) two amateur artists gave an art exhibition in London last month, which attracted lots of people to see it, including famous professional artists.

--------你可以参照我的翻译来对比你的翻译，这样你就可以知道一些各自的长处和短处。

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中风指定了就要用到stroke这个单词，那是用in 还是 from呢

追答

die from stroke -------- for sure .

Answer 4

第一句：grievous一般不形容人。
When his wife died of a stroke in her sixties, the 72-year-old retired professor was overwhelmed by grief.
第二句：Two amateur painters held an exhibition of their pictures in London last month. Many people went to see it including a few celebrated professionals.