Question

请大家帮忙修改下列英文翻译：多谢。

请大家修改我的翻译，谢谢：“事实上，我是一家药店的小职员，英语仅是我的业余爱好，我自学已经两年了，我是个很普通的人。”In fact,I am a petty clerk of pharmacy,English only is my hobby,I have alread learnd it for two years by myself, I am a very common person.

Answer 1

As a matter of fact，I am layfolk who works in the drugstore.Though English is just my hobby,nothing in the world can delight me so much as learning English.I have learnt English by
myself for two years.As an old saying goes"Success belongs to the persevering",and I will try my
best to learn English well.

擅自加了几句完善一下。我的翻译大致是这样的，事实上，我只是一个在药店工作的普通人（将后面的我是个很普通的人前移，不会显得繁琐）英语只是我的业余爱后，但是在这世界上（其实这个可以不用，但是加上去可以强调你热爱英语。但如果是作文的话，可能会太显极端，真不是特别喜欢英语的话不要用）没什么比学英语更能让我高兴（如果不想要可以删去，逗号改句号）我已经自学了两年英语。有一句俗语说的好，坚持就是胜利，我将尽我所能去学好英语（不要也可以删去）可能会有打字错误或漏打，请原谅！

Answer 2

你这个嘛 字面意思直译过来可以是你那个版本
Actually, I am just an employee to the pharmacy, who has been teaching myself English for two years. 严格来说 '英语'是‘爱好’这是个错句 英语写作英语唱歌等等行为才可以是‘爱好’. ‘我是个很普通的人’这句要么是多余要么不符合英语国家的文化，所以你用英语说这么一句话等于没任何意义。认为人人平等的国家里，个个都争做special的人。

Answer 3

English is just my hobby... 你那样很容易被理解成 English only | is my hobby 只说英语是我的业余爱好，而且就算要用only，only这类词通常放在实义动词前，助动词或be动词后。在口语里听过still可以在be动词前，I still am。only没怎么听说。

好像ordinary person也可以

然后其实你翻译的挺好的啦。

Answer 4

"In fact , I was a pharmacy clerk , English is only my hobby , I taught has been two years , I was a very ordinary person 谷歌翻译
"In fact, I is a small pharmacy staff, English is only my hobby, I taught myself two years, I am a very ordinary person 有道翻译
"In fact, I am a drugstore clerk, English is just my hobby, I taught for two years, I am a very ordinary person 百度翻译

Answer 5

In fact, I am a drugstore clerk, English is just my hobby, I taught for two years, I am a very ordinary person....