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Inmyfamily,therearethreepeople.Myfatherishardworkingbutgoestoworkinthefieldeveryday.H...
In my family,there are three people.My father is hardworking but goes to work in the field every day.He isn`t good at talk but he gets on well with other people.My mother is very much kind and is friendly to everybody.So when I have the problem I will turn to her for help.My fyiends say I am clever.When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions,I`ll think quickly and stand to answer.At home my father often thinks I`m silly.He said if I decide to do something,it takes him much times to stop me.This is how I need to improve in future.
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In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but(改为and,并且) goes to work in the field every day. He isn`t good at talk(改为talking,动名词) but he gets on well with other people. My mother is very much(去掉much) kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the(改为a。一个) problem I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. When the teacher asks us very difficulty(改为difficult,难的) questions, I`ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my father often thinks I`m silly. He said(改为says,常常说) if I decide to do something, it takes(改为will take,将花费) him much times(改为time,时间) to stop me.This is how(改为what) I need to improve in (加上the) future.
In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but(改为and,并且) goes to work in the field every day. He isn`t good at talk(改为talking,动名词) but he gets on well with other people. My mother is very much(去掉much) kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the(改为a。一个) problem I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. When the teacher asks us very difficulty(改为difficult,难的) questions, I`ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my father often thinks I`m silly. He said(改为says,常常说) if I decide to do something, it takes(改为will take,将花费) him much times(改为time,时间) to stop me.This is how(改为what) I need to improve in (加上the) future.
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