Question

雅思作文评分，只求分数及依据，不用具体的修改建议。

迫切想知道自己的水平究竟是怎样，因为之前没有参加过考试。跪谢。。

题目：
Somepeople think that parents should teach children how to be good members ofsociety. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discussthese views and give your own opinion.

正文：
Nowadays, how to educate children to begood members of society is a hot issue among people. There is a greatcontroversy over whether children should be taught by their parents or beeducated in schools. Both views will be discussed below.

Children educated by their parents may havea good understanding of how to become a good member of society. Because mostparents themselves who are able and willing to teach their children are goodmembers of society. So children can imitate their parents’ behaviours. For example,they can learn how to behave well in different situations, what to say invarious conversations, and how to address themselves decently in all sorts ofvenues.

On the other hand, schools are places thatdesigned for educating children. There are good facilities, experienced teachersand good social environments in schools, such facts are helpful to children’sdevelopment. By contrast, children who are educated by their parents at homemay not have access to a suitable social environment in which they can makefriends with other children and develop their soft skills.

In my opinion, both parents and schools shouldmake effort to make children become valuable members of society. At home,parents educate children to do things moderate, while in schools, teachersteach children academic knowledge as well as the rules of society. Under sucheducation, children are more likely to become decent members of society.

To sum up, parents as well as schools havethe responsibility to teach children how to be good members of society.
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Answer 1

题目：有些人认为父母应该教导孩子们如何成为良好的社会成员。其他人，然而，认为学校是学习的地方。discussthese观点并给出你自己的观点。正文：如今，如何教育孩子好的社会成员是人们关注的热门问题。还有是否应该教孩子的父母在学校或教育greatcontroversy。下面将要讨论的两种观点。儿童教育他们的父母可能有很好的了解如何成为一名优秀的社会成员。因为很多家长自己有能力并愿意教他们的孩子goodmembers社会。所以孩子们可以模仿父母的行为。例如，他们可以学习如何在不同情况下的表现很好，说什么不同的对话，以及如何解决自己的体面地在各种ofvenues。另一方面，学校的地方thatdesigned教育孩子。有良好的设施，经验丰富的教师在学校良好的社会环境，这样的事实是，有助于children'sdevelopment。相反，他们教育他们的父母在homemay不是孩子们可以在他们可以和其他孩子交朋友并发展自己的软技能的合适的社会环境。在我看来，父母和学校应该努力让孩子成为社会有用的成员。在家里，父母教育孩子的事情中，而在学校的孩子，teachersteach学术知识以及社会规则。在接受教育，儿童更容易成为社会体面的成员。总之，家长和学校有责任教孩子们如何成为社会的好成员。
【翻译过来是这样，你自己看着吧】

Answer 2

楼主以下是你的分和依据
分：6.0或6.5
依据：文章总体来说观点清晰，句式通畅，对题目的要求理解正确。但是观点还不够深入，个别地方用词不当，还有一些微小的语法错误，对于各方观点没有进行深入剖析，思想不够深刻。