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英文翻译（医学）

请把下面的一段话翻译成英文
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最好能在150~160字数之间，可略改大体意思
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骨质疏松的临床表现疼痛、身长缩短、骨折、以及呼吸功能下降
最先出现的是疼痛，原发性骨质疏松症最常见的症症，以腰背痛多见，沿脊柱向两侧扩散，仰卧或坐位时疼痛减轻，直立时后伸或久立、久坐时疼痛加剧
然后会出现身长缩短、驼背。多在疼痛后出现。
其次会有骨折。这是退行性骨质疏松症最常见和最严重的并发症，增加病人的痛苦，加重经济负责，并严重限制患者活动，甚至缩短寿命。
严重时呼吸功能下降。胸、腰椎压缩性骨折，脊椎后弯，胸廓畸形，可使肺活量和最大换气量显著减少
骨质疏松症的主要预防措施为：
一级预防：应从儿童、青少年做起，如注意合理膳食营养，多食用含Ca、P高的食品，如鱼、虾
二级预防：人到中年，骨丢失量加速进行。此时期应每年进行一次骨密度检查，对快速骨量减少的人群，应及早采取防治对策。
三级预防：促进骨形成应加强防摔、防碰、防绊、防颠等措施。对中老年骨折患者应积极手术
其主要的治疗方法为：钙剂和维生素D

Answer 1

感觉原文太中国化，试着改写一下。看行不行。
Osteoporosis is a condition of low bone mass and microarchtectural disruption that results in fratures with minimal trauma.
Clinical features includ pain, height loss,fratures.Pain may be the first appearance .And fractures constitute the only clinically relevant consequence to having a fragile skeleton.Common sites of fragile-related fractures include vertebral bodies,the distal forearm,and the proximal femur,but since the skeletons of patients with osteoporosis are diffusely fragile,other sites,such as ribs and long bones,also fratureswith high frequency.Vertebral compressiong fractures are the most common fragile-related fratures.Pain sufficient to require medical attention occures in approximately one-third of vertebral fractures,the majority being deteceted only as height loss or spinal deformity(kyphosis)occurs.Severe spinal deformity may cause respiratory dysfunction.
Prevention
Calsium supplementation is essentian in tne prevention and treatment of osteoporosis.All ages include those in childhood and adolescence should increase dietary calsium.
Bone mass measurement is required every year for middle aged person.Fall prevention and education are important for osteoporosis.Clsium supplements and vitamin D are benefitial for patients with osteoporosis.

Answer 2

What the osteoporosis the clinical manifestation ache, the height reduce, the bone fracture, as well as the breath function drop to appear first is the ache, primary osteoporosis sickness most common sickness sickness, sees by the waist backache, along the spinal column to the both sides proliferation, lies supine either when the seat pain ease, when the erectness, extends or for a long time stands, for a long time sits when the ache to intensify then to present the height to reduce humpbacked. Many after the ache appears. the next will have the bone fracture. This is the recession osteoporosis sickness is most common and the most serious complication, increases patient's pain, the aggravation economy is responsible, and limits the patient to move seriously, even reduces the life. is serious when breathes the function to drop. Chest, lumbar vertebra compressibility bone fracture, after the vertebra curved, the chest gallery is abnormal, may cause the vital capacity and the biggest air change quantity obviously reduces the osteoporosis sickness the main preventive measure is: first-level prevention: Should from the child, the young people start, like the attention reasonable meals nutrition, edible contains Ca, P high food, like fish, shrimp second-level prevention: The human arrives at the middle age, the bone loses the quantity to accelerate to carry on. This time should every year carry on a bone density inspection, reduces the crowd to the fast bone quantity, should take the prevention countermeasure early. third-level prevention: Promotes the bone to form should strengthen against falls, against bumps, against stumbles, measures and so on against summit. To the middle and old aged bone fracture patient should positive surgery the its main method of treatment be: Calcium medicinal preparation and Vitamin D