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请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英文小作文，关于最近一期的中国好声音。并有两处中文不知道该怎么写。

上个星期五播放的中国好声音真的是让我有点失望。
首先播放的第一首歌就选择《最炫民族风》就让人觉得有点不可思议，还把歌曲改得那么嘈杂，感觉和原版比起来相差不是一点点。
另外一首糟糕的让人印象深刻的个就是《心中的日月》，好好的一首歌却用了太多太过夸张的转音，听着真的让人很不舒服。
感觉最有水准的就是最后一首歌，歌选得好，两个人都发挥的又好，歌曲结束后真的是难分高下。其中一个选手在自身有口吃的情况下，能将歌曲唱的那么好，还惨遭淘汰，实在是让人感觉很遗憾。
最后要说的事，处于某些个人原因，对于王力宏的印象是大打折扣。以后当然还是会听他的歌，但是真的不是很想在电视机上在看到他。

Feeling a little disappoint about The Voice of China in last Friday.
I’m quite surprised about to hear ‘The Coolest Ethnic Trend’ (最炫民族风) as the TV show’s first song, and the song has been changed quite noisy, compare the ordinary version, it's totally not good.
The next song leave me a really bad impression is "the sun and moon in the heart" (心中的日月), feel really uncomfortable when hear too much and too over 转音 in the edit version.
But the last song is quite good. The song is really good and two players singing also quite good. It's really hard to say who was better when they finished the song. I feel really sorry about one of the songer was eliminated who speaks with a little stutter but still in good voice at that song.
In the last, for some person reason, 对于王力宏的印象大打折扣。 Maybe I will still listen his song in the future, but I really don't want see him anymore on the TV.

Answer 1

试比较：
Feel a little disappointed about The Voice of China last Friday.
I was quite surprised to hear ‘The Coolest Ethnic Trend’ (最炫民族风) as the TV show’s first song. The song was sung with quite some noise, compared with its original version. It was totally unacceptable!
The next song, "the sun and moon in the heart", left a really bad impression on me. I felt really uncomfortable when hearing too many off-tunes from the well-known version.
The last song was good, though. The two singers performed well. It was really hard to say who was better than the other when they finished the song. I felt really sorry about the one who was dropped out of the competition. He (She) was choking up in his (her) speech at the end but still in good voice while singing.
Finally, for some personal reasons, I was disappointed by Wang Lihong's performance. Maybe I will still listen to his songs in the future. But I really don't want see him on TV anymore.