Question

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Smile at our life
In our life,we all have many problems.We have to deal with them.
Do you often complain about your life?In fact,we can smile at our life.
We know Stephen Hawking,a famous scientist.He has some physical problems,but he never give up,so he has become very successful.By comparing ourselves to him,we will find our problems aren't so terrible.
We should smile at our life.If some problems make us fretful,we can regard problems as challenges.If you do it,you will feel differently and be happy.Don't be afaid of difficulties,because sometimes they can make us develop well.Let's face the problems bravely and smile at our life.

Answer 1

we all have many problems.We have to deal with them————----我觉得改成这样比较好耶 we all have many problems that we have to deal with .
we can smile at our life.---我觉得怪怪的 用can——should!
We know Stephen Hawking,a famous scientist.------There is a famous scientist called Stephen Hawking who has some physical problems.
However ,he never gave up so that he become successful in the end.
we can regard problems as challenges.这里也好像是can-should 比较好
（可是should太多又好像不太好）
you will feel differently and be happy.---------you will feel different and happier.(feel是系动词后面加adj可以的)
Don't be afaid of difficulties,because sometimes they can make us develop well.----Don't be afaid of difficulties!Because they can make us strong most of time.
Let's face all the problems we meet bravely and smile at our life.
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