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求解答过程：短文改错 假如英语

短文改错 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. I had a dream for over a year to attend the Climate Change Conference in Copenhagen. I have even reserved a hostel room a year for advance. I had worked very hard to arrange things, but had trouble raise money for the trip.I asked one of my MBA professor for help, but he apologized, because not many money available right now. Then he asked me that if she could help me out with flight miles. I thanked him and two weeks late his assistant contacted me to get all my information. Before that I had my ticket!The professor's kindness in supporting my dream is so a wonderful act!

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