Question

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下case study的写作。把明显的文法错误修改一下。 谢谢

'Do social Deal Sites Really Work?' concerns a marketing capabilities in Flanagan which is a famous theme parks. Currently, there have a dispute happen in the Flanagan's meeting room. Ruth Davison who is the marketing director of Flanagan Theme Parks intends to cooperate with Daildilly which is a fast-growing Australian social-couponing company in vigorously promoting the coupons. However, Allie who had been working with Flanagan for just over a month strong opposed this plan. Will Eastman who is Flanagan’s operations director considers whether social deal sites could give Flanagan the marketing capabilities. In other words, Flanagan should decide whether to keep the profit to provide a better customer experience or reduce profit to discount.

Answer 1

很抱歉地告诉你，错误不少。以下是我的修改：

'Do social Deal Sites Really Work?' 你是否想说：
Does Social Marketing Deals Really Work?

Social marketing deals which is a marketing strategy is under review by Flanagan, a famous theme park company.. Currently, there is a debate going on in the Flanagan's meeting room. Ruth Davison who is the marketing director of Flanagan, intends to cooperate with Daildilly which is a fast-growing Australian social-couponing company in vigorously promoting the coupons. However, Allie (全名) who has been working with Flanagan for just over a month strongly opposes this plan. Will Eastman who is Flanagan’s operations director considers whether social marketing deals would give Flanagan the marketing edges. In other words, Flanagan should decide whether to keep the profit to provide a better customer experience or reduce profit to discount. 很难理解最后一句话，所以不知如何修改。