Question

英语改错!!!

Eddie liked music very much.After leaving in
a medical college he went to work in hospital.
There he found that a lot of patient were happier
and caused little trouble if pleasant music was
playing to them.So,when he began to work in his
office he had a recorder playing beautiful music
to keep his patients happy.A morning soon after
the recorder has been played,a woman,who was
sitting in the crowded waiting room,she complained,
"We'er all waiting here to see the doctor
while he just playing the violin in hes office
instead of doing his medical work."

Answer 1

1.“我来自一个家庭”，由翻译可知，在low的前面加a;
2.把I
have
to
work的have改成had，全文时态为一般过去时;
3.删掉one，first和one语义重复;
4.把felt改成feeling,因为feeling和going一样，做remember的宾语，要用动名词的形式；
5.把harder改成hard，原句没有比较的意味，所以用原形；
6.把very
tired的very改成too，因为由后文可知作者认为知识更重要，所以本句想要表达“太累了而没法做作业”；
7.把understand
that的that改成it，只有it可以做形式宾语，真正的宾语为to
earn
money；
8.knowledges改成knowledge，knowledge是抽象名词，不可数；
9.把as改成than，more...than...表示比较。

Answer 2

1.in 去掉
2.in 和hospital中间加a
3.patient加s
4.caused改为make或cause
5.playing改为played
6.
7.
8.
9.has改为had
10.she去掉
11.plays
12.

Answer 3

liked---likes.
leaving 去掉
in hospital 改成in a hospital.
patient 改成 patients
were happier--would be happier
caused-cause,这里造成麻烦应该用主动语态。
playing--played
hes--his
has been played--was played
crowded---crowd

Answer 4

2楼的改个P 一个字没变 没见过这么不要脸的

改为
Eddie likes music very much.
After medical college he went to work in hospital.
He found a lot of patients would be happier
and caused less trouble if pleasant music was
playing to them.

So, he began to work in his office he had a recorder playing beautiful music to keep his patients happy.

A morning soon after the recorder had been played,a woman,who was sitting in the crowded waiting room,she complained,
"We'er all waiting here to see the doctor
while he just playing the violin in hes office
instead of doing his medical work."

Answer 5

Eddie liked music very much.After he left in
a medical college he went to work in hospital.
There he found that a lot of patients were happily
and caused little trouble if pleasant music was
playing with them.So,when he began to work in his
office he had a recorder playing beautiful music
to keep his patients happy.A morning soon after
the recorder has been played,a woman,who was
sitting in the crowded waiting room,she complained,
"We're all waiting here to see the doctor
while he just playing the violin in hes office
instead of doing his medical work."
已经改了，自己做对比
这个是过去时
（我要做最佳答案）