Question

英语短文改错网上求助

短文改错 Thank you fou your letter.Honest speaking,I've thought many about whether you should buy a computer to help you with your study.In my opinion,you'd better not to.Fou one reason,it's easy fou you to develop some good habits if you have it,such as playing computer games,seeing movies and so on,which will be waste of time.For another reason,buy a laptop computer doesn't mean you can study good.If you want to make progresss,you need to work hard.Whether you have a computer or not aren't most important. Do you agree about me？Looking fouward to you reply！

Answer 1

1. Honest----Honestly
2. many---more
3. not to中的to删去
4. it改为them或者把habits改为habit
5. waste前加a
6. buy改为buying
7. good改为well
8. aren't改为isn't
9. about改为with
10. you reply中的you改为your

Answer 2

错误的标注出来了，黑体字。
Thank you fou your letter.Honestly speaking,I've thought much about whether you would buy a computer to help you with your study.In my opinion,you'd better not 【to 删掉】 Fou one reason,it's easy fou you to develop some good habits if you have it,such as playing computer games,seeing movies and so on,which will be a waste of time.For another reason,buying a laptop computer doesn't mean you can study well.If you want to make progress,you need to work hard.Whether you have a computer or not isn't most important. Do you agree with me？Looking fouward to yourreply！

Answer 3

最后一行，about改为with