Question

英语翻译：帮我看看我翻得对不对，看看哪里有错

看看哪里有语法错误，不用太苛求，像什么两句话其实可以并一句的这类问题不算在内，主要看看有没有语法错误

Answer 1

has a history of more than 4000 years at least 【has a history of (at least 修饰词位置)more than 4000 years】
a main cloth ——a main 【material for clothing】
a important——an important
since long ago——from early times 更常用
silk cloth——silk clothing
thus China is called ——and therefore China is also called
Silk makes people's life more beautiful and also promotes the friendly contact——
并列部分最好用词对等，都是动词，或都是形容词，建议：
Silk beautifies people's life and promotes the friendly contacts between China and other countries all over the world as well.

你的翻译本身不错，以上仅作交流和参考。

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追答

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Answer 2

more than 4000 years at least 改成 at least 4000 years
since long ago 改成 long time ago
various kinds of 改成 varieties of
the western people 改成 western people
It is said in AD.... 改成 It is said that an ancient...... in AD first century
hope 改成 hoped is also called 改成 was also called

追问

我怎么觉得您说的前三个都不对头

追答

more than 和 at least 不能放在一起用
第二个也没有觉得不对 但是就觉得你用的怪怪的 帮你查了下 没有since long ago 搜出来的都是 since a long time ago
varieties of 是打错了应该是 variety of

还有如果你想看自己的翻译地不地道可以把一些词组放到谷歌上搜一下，看看跳出来的英文网页有没有这样的用法

Answer 3

1.Silk had been became a main cloth
2.an important foreign trade commodity
3.since a long time ago.
4.The Chinese ancient silk was rich and colorful
5. all the people desired to having a chinese silk cloth, that is why China is known as "silk Nation"