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有好评英语作文！急

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Hello,everybody~My name is **,I am from jiangsu and I am a-17-girl in senior high school.I love reading and listening to music in my spare time and sometmes I will go out to shop with my friends .I am friendly and outgoing,and I love making friends with others.I want to make friends with you ,Thanks.
你好，每个人都~我叫**，我来自江苏，我在高中a-17-girl。我喜欢看书和听音乐在我的业余时间，有时候我会和朋友出去购物。我的友好和外向，我喜欢跟别人交朋友。我想你做朋友，谢谢。

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应该差不多了。加一句“I'm 14 year old” 我十四岁了。 “”I want to be a doctor“我想成为一名医生。 doctor=医生，可替换