Question

帮忙修改一篇英语作文。急（别人的文章）

Looking for a pen friend
My name is Xiao Ya. I’m Chinese. I’m12 .I’m a kind and nice girl. I like to read newspaper and drink coffee. My hobbies are badminton and computer games. My parents are chinese too. They are live in Qing Hai now. My mother is a teacher and my father is a doctor. I’d like a pen friend from China or other country. If you can think, is interested. Please write to: 702 Jian Guo Road, Qing Hai, China.

Answer 1

Looking for a pen friend
My name is Xiao Ya. I’m Chinese. My age is 12 .I’m a kind and nice girl. I like reading newspaper and drinking coffee. My hobbies are badminton and play computer games. My parents are chinese ,too.Now they are live in Qing Hai . My mother is a teacher and my father is a doctor. I’d like a pen friend from over the world. If you think it's interesting. Please write to: 702 Jian Guo Road, Qing Hai, China.

Xiao Ya
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不过这作文... 废话好多诶..
呵呵.
改好仂.

Answer 2

Looking for a pen friend
My name is Xiao Ya. I'm Chinese. I'm 12 . I'm a kind and nice girl. I like to read newspaper and drink coffee. My hobbies are (playing) badminton and computer games. My parents are chinese too. They ()live in Qing Hai now. My mother is a teacher and my father is a doctor. I’d like a pen friend (not only in )China so do other (countries). If you ()are interested in it, please write to: 702 Jian Guo Road, Qing Hai, China.

Answer 3

Looking for a penfriend
My name is Xiao Ya. I’m a Chinese. I’m12 .I’m a kind and nice girl. I like to read newspaper and drink coffee. My hobbies are badminton and computer games. My parents are chinese too. They are live in Qing Hai now. My mother is a teacher and my father is a doctor. I’d like a pen friend from China or the other country. Is very interesting.you can write to: 702 Jian Guo Road, Qing Hai, China.