Question

下面的英语有语法错误么

First of all, Shanghai has recently begun to enter the rainy season, so it often rains, so I suggest you should prepare an umbrella in advance to prevent you from being caught by the rain after you get off the plane

Answer 1

First of all, Shanghai has recently begun to enter the rainy season, so it often rains, so I suggest you should prepare an umbrella in advance to prevent you from being caught by the rain after you get off the plane。
无太大错误
[搭配错误] 搭配 prepare umbrella 无此用法，疑似中式英语。
[推荐表达] so : therefore/thus/consequently/accordingly/as a result/for that reason/hence/that’s why

追问

第二个so 我改成thus了 但是你说的prepare umbrella 这个搭配是不可以用么 有替换说法么不要影响整段话 谢谢

追答

so I suggest you take/keep an umbrella in advance
不用客气